Saturday, September 21, 2013

My Sexy Saturday - To Touch the Sky


Happy Saturday and welcome to My Sexy Saturday! For this hop you post 7 paragraphs or 7 sentences or 7 words. It can be from a WIP or something published.

For this week, I thought I’d do something from a WIP I'm working on called To Touch the Sky. It's the second novel in the Leap of Faith series. In our day and age, this Native American shifter is called Hawk. The excerpt takes place before the white man arrived. During this time, Hawk went by the name Chetan. Oh, and he's a red-tailed hawk shifter.

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“Oh Spirit,” Chetan whispered. He’d let his attention drift from his nephew and now… His own cries joined the madness as a monstrous bull darted from the stampede and charged Isi.
Several spears protruded from the maddened bull. The night was cool, and steam blew from its nose. The rank smell of the animal nearly gagged him. As reality slowed to a crawl, he saw Isi standing still, his hands by his side… doing nothing. Sound distorted and warped as he yelled, his voice hopelessly lost in the pandemonium raging around him, for Isi to move, draw his bow… do something.
Isi stood frozen as Chetan continued to yell, running toward the young brave, waving his arms frantically. If he could just get the bull’s attention… If he could just get to Isi’s side before… He saw a black cougar casing the buffalo, gaining rapidly. More cat shifters landed on the buffalo’s back and attacked, sinking their great canines into the animal. It still wasn’t enough. The bull was now a short distance from Isi and bearing down, the young warrior in its sights.
Oh Wha-tay, I’m not going to make it! His legs pumped, his breath wheezed… and it didn’t matter. Oh please, Great Mother, no. Not this young one. Please. It’s my fault. I let myself get distracted. Don’t let him… Take me, instead.
The black cougar raced besides the buffalo then darted in close as it latched on to the throat in an effort to suffocate the massive beast. The danger was immense; the buffalo would trample the black cougar if given the chance. The bull was too close and still Isi stood unmoving. Why is he just standing there? There was no way, no way for him to get to Isi in time.
Chetan stumbled to a stop and raised his bow, carefully taking aim. Please, please, let my aim be true. The arrow struck the buffalo dead in the face, but it was too late. It plowed into Isi with its mighty horns. Isi’s body flew high into the air, blood spurting form the terrible wounds in his body. A scream filled the air. Was that Isi? Isi’s mother? Or the bull?
“No. No!” Chetan’s own scream joined the ones around him.

 

3 comments:

  1. Oh my! Very powerful, plus I love the symbolism of a redtail hawk. Well done!

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  2. Looking forward to getting this one as soon as it is published!
    Thanks for sharing.
    Evelise

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  3. Exciting snippet. Love all the symbolism seen in the excerpt. Thanks for sharing!

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